This story has really struck a chord with me ever since it came out. I just keep coming back to read through it again and again, it gives me some much needed hope for dealing with my own trauma (nothing so grievous as what the MC goes through but trauma nonetheless) the path of healing the MC is being set on is just so very inspiring to me, a reminder that no matter how broken you are that there is always a chance to heal and move on to something better in your life.
Daaaaaaark. Love it though. Much respect for not shying away from some very atrocious/hard themes; humanity comes in all flavors.
I Love my MC, I love that they're broken and not just magically - - fixed, despite being rescued. There's such, such Trauma there - and that mind may never be 'un-broken'. Not to mention the arms. I think that's what interests me most: Seeing how this very clearly broken child will grow up; what they will become. (You explained the 'Pain' and 'Void' cycle and its Repetition incredibly well, btw) Havard and Lexi and Ethel (I think my MC will like her most) all seem like genuinely good souls. They'll have their work cut out for them -- and it's nice seeing the frustration in wanting to help, but being unable to in their POVs; but time and them proving their words will do wonders. Very interested to see how twins interaction will go. (And if there will be romance? Because - OOF. Just: OOF.) That 'red and white stuff' highly concerned me; but I also love broken babes finding empathy in one another.
That last interlude... Of course, the 'bad people' couldn't be totally gone. Looks like there's definitely going to be -- 'something' fighting to do more Terrible things to my baby. Keeping an eye on this one~
That's really interesting, I'm so exited to see how it will develop, the growing of the kids and everything else. True masterpiece being made here❤️ can't wait for the next update
this is hands down my favorite twine game i've played so far. everything is so well thought out and the choices you make actually get brought up later and it feels much more like you're your own person and not just a customizable character with a preset personality. that, and as someone with childhood trauma this feels surprisingly healing. big thank you so far and please update i will love you forever fr
Time to share my opinion to the wonder internet :D Honestly, I LOVE the story so far, at first I kinda thought the prologue and interludes went on a bit too long since you don't get to do anything in them, but looking back on it I definitely see how it's needed for exposition haha, anytime it's brought up it hits MUCH harder than it would have if it hadn't gone into detail.
And chapter two made UP for it, the customization is probably one of the best I've seen in ANY cyoa game ever and I LOVE how it keeps getting brought up. I absolutely HATE how in most games you get to create a whole character and then proceed to only hear it brought up in a summery of your characters right after you create your character, it's AWFUL ;-; and this one doesn't do that, so thank you :D
But yeah, can't wait to meet the twins, I actually love their personalities lol, sorry for the rant, 10/10, will play when chapter 3 comes out :]
I had my character not remember his name and then question why having name was important, but then allow Havard to name them. When Havard is talking to Lexia in her interlude, he says that my character has no name, but then starts using the chosen name as well as Lexia, even though they've already talked about having no name to refer to him as.
Also in that same interaction, just after that point, there was some mix-up with the pronouns I think? Havard and Lexia were using 'they/them' for a few lines in reference to my character rather than 'he/him'. A better screenshot of that will be in reply to this comment.
there's a gramatical error on turn 84. it says "Of course, Azha would have be the one to do the asking, but she liked to include him." and is missing a "to" between have and be.
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This story has really struck a chord with me ever since it came out. I just keep coming back to read through it again and again, it gives me some much needed hope for dealing with my own trauma (nothing so grievous as what the MC goes through but trauma nonetheless) the path of healing the MC is being set on is just so very inspiring to me, a reminder that no matter how broken you are that there is always a chance to heal and move on to something better in your life.
Daaaaaaark. Love it though. Much respect for not shying away from some very atrocious/hard themes; humanity comes in all flavors.
I Love my MC, I love that they're broken and not just magically - - fixed, despite being rescued. There's such, such Trauma there - and that mind may never be 'un-broken'. Not to mention the arms. I think that's what interests me most: Seeing how this very clearly broken child will grow up; what they will become. (You explained the 'Pain' and 'Void' cycle and its Repetition incredibly well, btw) Havard and Lexi and Ethel (I think my MC will like her most) all seem like genuinely good souls. They'll have their work cut out for them -- and it's nice seeing the frustration in wanting to help, but being unable to in their POVs; but time and them proving their words will do wonders. Very interested to see how twins interaction will go. (And if there will be romance? Because - OOF. Just: OOF.) That 'red and white stuff' highly concerned me; but I also love broken babes finding empathy in one another.
That last interlude... Of course, the 'bad people' couldn't be totally gone. Looks like there's definitely going to be -- 'something' fighting to do more Terrible things to my baby. Keeping an eye on this one~
That's really interesting, I'm so exited to see how it will develop, the growing of the kids and everything else. True masterpiece being made here❤️ can't wait for the next update
Absolutely amazing, the customization iz INSANE it's so detailed and well-written. The potential's crazy I absolutely cannot wait for more<33333
one of the best twine games I've ever played, it's amazing, five stars for plot and choices!
this is hands down my favorite twine game i've played so far. everything is so well thought out and the choices you make actually get brought up later and it feels much more like you're your own person and not just a customizable character with a preset personality. that, and as someone with childhood trauma this feels surprisingly healing. big thank you so far and please update i will love you forever fr
Time to share my opinion to the wonder internet :D Honestly, I LOVE the story so far, at first I kinda thought the prologue and interludes went on a bit too long since you don't get to do anything in them, but looking back on it I definitely see how it's needed for exposition haha, anytime it's brought up it hits MUCH harder than it would have if it hadn't gone into detail.
And chapter two made UP for it, the customization is probably one of the best I've seen in ANY cyoa game ever and I LOVE how it keeps getting brought up. I absolutely HATE how in most games you get to create a whole character and then proceed to only hear it brought up in a summery of your characters right after you create your character, it's AWFUL ;-; and this one doesn't do that, so thank you :D
But yeah, can't wait to meet the twins, I actually love their personalities lol, sorry for the rant, 10/10, will play when chapter 3 comes out :]
Got this error when I decided not to choose any special features for the character.
Thank you! I will fix that when I have the time.
I had my character not remember his name and then question why having name was important, but then allow Havard to name them. When Havard is talking to Lexia in her interlude, he says that my character has no name, but then starts using the chosen name as well as Lexia, even though they've already talked about having no name to refer to him as.
Also in that same interaction, just after that point, there was some mix-up with the pronouns I think? Havard and Lexia were using 'they/them' for a few lines in reference to my character rather than 'he/him'. A better screenshot of that will be in reply to this comment.
Here's the mix-up of pronouns screenshot.
2nd paragraph in the screenshot: "Maybe Havard would have caught them?"
4th paragraph: "I did have to chase after them..."
Oh, one more thing, sorry. Minor typo, should be 'damage' not 'damange'. Hopefully this all helps you. :)
Thank you for all of these! I will investigate!
Edit: I think I fixed it :D New game/a save before the name choice required to fix the bug.
i just wanted to say I'm fairly new to if, and I absolutely love this! Thank you for making it, I can't wait for more!
there's a gramatical error on turn 84. it says "Of course, Azha would have be the one to do the asking, but she liked to include him." and is missing a "to" between have and be.
Thank you! I will fix that.
And in 105 it says " €capitalheshe was calming down,"
Thank you Will fix that one too.