This looks good and has potential, it's a bit early for me to say more but growing stronger in an orphanage in a fantasy setting sound like a lot of fun.
what a sad, bitter and still so beautiful start in your story. I'm glad the ancient found and rescued us, no one should ever do this to a child. (nor to other living beings.) i'm happy my MC trusted Havard and it was so sweet to 'see' them hugging each other :D I'm looking forward to read more and meet the other characters <3
oh and I found a writing mistake, it should be coughing, not couching (if you mean the 'cough, cough' sound when we try to talk to Havard C: )
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Loved it! This is a super interesting premise, creative too! Can't wait to read more :)
Glad to hear that! Thank you! Aah, it seems all my responses are basically the same :D Oh well, they are true.
So far I love it!! Made me want to cry!
Thank you very much! Glad to hear some emotions landed!
This looks good and has potential, it's a bit early for me to say more but growing stronger in an orphanage in a fantasy setting sound like a lot of fun.
Thank you! Let's hope growing up will be fun.... :D
what a sad, bitter and still so beautiful start in your story. I'm glad the ancient found and rescued us, no one should ever do this to a child. (nor to other living beings.) i'm happy my MC trusted Havard and it was so sweet to 'see' them hugging each other :D I'm looking forward to read more and meet the other characters <3
oh and I found a writing mistake, it should be coughing, not couching (if you mean the 'cough, cough' sound when we try to talk to Havard C: )
Thank you! Happy to hear you liked it so far! And thank you for the typo! I will fix that.
Awesome stuff. Can’t wait to follow this games progress.
Thank you! I am glad you like it so far!